okay well me and my friends were a little bored. and decided if we were ever directors we would make a movie called ''abused'' setting: new york. okay a 14 year old girl named Becka and an 18 year old named craig lived with there grandparent's most of there life. Becka didn't no anything about her child hood nothing all the pictures were missing. the grandma told Becka when she was 4 that her parents both died in a car accident but when she turned 9 she told her, her mom was sent to jail and far far away from the kids and the dad lived in Laos Anglos, California. and when they were younger they had a little sister that died also. well one day they get a note in the mail and it was there dad sending plane tickets for Laos Anglos to see them, a couple days later they get on a plane for LosAngeles. when they arrive there, there dad had picked them up and taken them home to see there his special ''surprise'' and it was his new girl friend. when becka saw her for the first time she started having horrible mine grains and flash backs in her headdd... it isnt over yet if you would like to no more message mehh. please no rude comments it took me time to write thiss.
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I like it.....it needs some refining though! Um......i like the flash back parts. Put some more twists in there. And maybe a love interest. I like it though! i would go see it! 8)
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